Tuesday, June 10, 2014

Final Reflection Essay



Christopher Thomsen
Dr. Jason Smith
English 101
6/10/14
            Starting at the beginning of this semester, I was a recently turned thirty year old that hadn’t attended college for a very long time. I didn’t know what to expect and I was worried that I wouldn’t remember the basics. The thing was I was actually excited and motivated by school work for the first time in my life. My goal is to become a radiology technician and if I actually had a plan like that my first time around maybe things would have went differently at NCC.
            When I first walked into class, I was late and stressed out and then I had to write an essay. It was really hard for me to write even though the subject content was provided. When it was finished I was extremely relieved. I thought it was really cool that the book was provided and found the subject content to be interesting. Fast Food Nation was a book that I wanted to read and I didn’t find it difficult to keep up with. It’s getting somewhat out dated, but it’s nice to read something that was actually written recently about a topic that affects our everyday lives.
            This class has taught me how to properly site articles as well as text and it’s about time I learned. I found out what websites can be trusted and what I should stay away from. Through the library lab we had I learned how to use the schools website and have found it extremely helpful with my final papers research. I enjoyed writing my research paper because pollution is something I’m passionate about and have found myself contributing to conversations more when a like topic arises. I feel more confident in my research ability after taking this class and the grade I have received will give me the confidence I need to continue on towards my goal.  I NEED to work on my comma placement and will have that sorted out when I see you in the fall. Until then have a great summer and thank you for your patience and knowledge. I have finished all my finals and I’m going to get a beer, right now.     

Monday, May 19, 2014

Research Paper Entry 11

Factory farms also known as CAFO's (Central Organized Feeding Operations) have extremely negative effects on everyone's living environment that directly affect you, whether you realize it or not. Living close enough to them can also impact your health and the quality of living in the community. The goal that CAFO's have involve making a lot of food on a very small amount of land at an affordable price. The problem with this is CAFO's will do it at any and all costs, the space that the animals are squeezed into leads to the releasing of extreme amounts of harmful gases from their waste products into the atmosphere and water at levels that are extremely unsafe and unmanageable for the environment to keep up with. Former government administrations have made it really easy for the CAFO's to continue their path of environmental destruction, it's going to take a lot work to undo the damage. Damage control needs to start with the population being educated to see the harmful effects these farms are doing because most of us live in a place that is nowhere near one and that enables us to remain uninformed. The population can start with making the choice to purchase products produced on sustainable farms but that will only help so much and the choice to make the right decision unfortunately also comes with a higher price tag that most are not willing to pay. I feel the real change needs to start with tighter EPA regulations. Not only do they need to make these regulations stricter the enforcement is also a major concern.
            CAFO’s destroy communities and harm the people surrounding them in numerous ways. Once a CAFO moves into a community it starts the process of deterioration, right off the bat property values decrease, the economy comes to a standstill, and the disgusting order attacks and infuses itself with everything it possibly can inside your home and no matter what you do it won’t go away. So now the community is in economic plunder at least the inhibitors still have their health, not true this too is now also being attacked. CAFO’s “do so by contaminating ground and surface water, releasing harmful pollutants into the air, promoting the development of antibiotic-resistant bacteria, incubating infectious diseases, and facilitating the continued overuse of chemical pesticides.” (Public Health) Growing up in New York most likely doesn’t exposure you to the horrors of these factory farms. If you travel to the outskirts you will most likely only see small sustainable family run farms these are the ones that should be supported.
            Manure, it smells horrible, it’s the source of everything damaging, and there is a lot of it! Factory farms often store animal waste in lagoons and it’s applied to the land as fertilizer, but unlike human waste it is untreated. In fact “The annual production of manure produced by animal confinement facilities exceeds that produced by humans by at least three times” (Pew p.13) With so much manure being produced at these CAFO’s it often leads to spills and leaks in lagoons that are not properly maintained. Being applied to oversaturated land that cannot possibly absorb it all is the other issue. The surface and ground water get infiltrated by run off and that leads to the contamination of the surrounding community’s drinking water that they so heavily rely on. This contaminated water contains nitrates, pathogens, hormones, antibiotic-resistant bacteria, salts and heavy metals. (Hribar)  “In US counties with factory farms, approximately 1.3 million households rely on water wells in which nitrate levels exceed the Maximum Contaminant Level set by the EPA.” (Consumer) This information was given by the EPA in 2002, 12 years later and its certain nitrate levels have only gotten far worst. These high nitrate levels in drinking water lead to a disease called “baby blue syndrome” this leads to an infant’s blood to no longer be able to hold a normal amount of oxygen and can be fatal if untreated.  Adults can also be affected by having extreme cases of diuresis which is the increase or excess production of urine, increased starchy deposits, and possible hemorrhaging of the spline. Pathogens are a higher threat to young children and the older population and can cause diarrhea, cramps, and headaches along with other medical problems. (Consumer) The growth hormones that are pumped into these animals can also still be apparent in the manure and have serious health effects that may lead to breast and testicular cancer. Salts attack drinking water as well causing high blood pressure and in some cases levels become so high that the water becomes undrinkable. Antibiotic-resistant bacteria can cause infections that typical antibiotics can no longer fight. (Public Health) The animals continue to be pumped with more and more antibiotics to keep them “healthy” instead of the CAFO’s spending money to find ways to remedy disgusting conditions. Profit margin is their only concern. I like to think of them as the McDonald's of animal farming. In fact factory farms were formed to keep up with the high demands of the fast food industry so you can see why profit margin is so important. (Fast)
            So you may think that just because you don’t live directly in these communities you are not affected by water pollution. You would be wrong in fact contaminates from factory farms make their way into lakes, streams, ponds, and rivers. This renders fishing and swimming in these waters unsafe. (Public Health) “Almost 40 percent of the nation’s surveyed waters are so polluted they're unsafe for swimming or fishing.  According to the EPA’s 2000 National Water Quality Inventory, agricultural sources were responsible for polluting 128,859 miles of surveyed rivers and streams, 3,158,393 acres of surveyed lakes, and 2,811 square miles of surveyed estuaries”(Public Health) Again this information was released by the EPA in 2002, why is new data so hard to find? The EPA is still around, but what have they been doing for 12 years? This information will be looked at further later in my paper.
            Water pollution is just the beginning to the damage these large CAFO’s pose to the environment. Air pollution is also a major concern as some of the effects are burden for everyone not just the communities surrounding them. CAFO’s hurt the surrounding communities through the reduction of air quality. This happens in a few ways, the movement of animals result in particle emissions, gas emissions occur through the decomposition of animal waste in lagoons and also when its spread to fertilize land, heavy traffic of trucks constantly going in and out of the farms also contribute to air pollution. (Hribar) Although the transportation industry causes traffic and releases harmful pollutants into communities surrounding factory farms and all over the world, in its entirety the contribution is less to global warming than CAFO’s.
  Along with particle matter the typical air pollutants found around factory farms include the gases ammonia, hydrogen sulfide, and methane. All are extremely dangerous and only one out of the four cannot hurt you directly. Ammonia gas is a respiratory irritant chemical burns cause damage to the respiratory tract along with the skin and eyes this leads to a severe cough and chronic lung disease. These gases are released when the breakdown of the manure happens which is also true for hydrogen sulfide. (Hribar) Health effects from hydrogen sulfide vary and depend on how long and how much you are exposed too. Some mild symptoms include fatigue and headaches, gradually you will loose your smell and severe damage to the eyes occurs, extreme levels lead to a quick death that can happen instantly or take thirty to sixty minutes depending on the level of exposure. (Hydrogen) In this case the workers on the farms are more at risk then the community when it comes to a fatal exposure.
Particle matter is a major issue as it seems to be able to affect the surrounding communities greatest as it is able to travel longer distances. The source of these particles comes from a variety of things that include animals bedding material, dry manure, unpaved soil surfaces, animal dander, and poultry feathers. Fecal matter, bacteria, fungi, skin cells, and silicates attach themselves to the particles and the wind carries them away from the farms into the neighboring areas. Health effects consist of chronic bronchitis, chronic respiratory symptoms, organic dust syndrome, and significant declines in lung function. (Hribar) Unfortunately the demographic most effected by particle matter happen to be children as take in 20-50% more air than adults making them more susceptible to lung disease. Studies done in North Carolina that consisted of 226 schools showed that factory farms increased asthma in the surrounding communities as the children closest to these farms had the highest rates. (Hribar)
Methane and nitrous oxide gases are harmful “greenhouse” gases and directly contribute to climate change and global warming. Think back to ten or fifteen years ago the seasons changed and temperatures did along with them. Everything seemed to have a schedule, now one day its seventy degrees out and the next day it’s thirty-five. Just because its winter doesn’t mean its cold out, the summers are getting hotter and the winters longer and harsher. Global warming is real and as the days go on it’s becoming more and more apparent. “Globally, livestock operations are responsible for approximately 18% of greenhouse gas production and over 7% of U.S. greenhouse gas emissions (Massey & Ulmer, 2008). While carbon dioxide is often considered the primary greenhouse gas of concern, manure emits methane and nitrous oxide which are 23 and 300 times more potent as greenhouse gases than carbon dioxide, respectively. The EPA attributes manure management as the fourth leading source of nitrous oxide emissions and the fifth leading source of methane emissions (EPA, 2009).”(Hribar) CAFO’s are amongst the leading contributors to global warming and they need to be regulated and controlled. You can’t ask one to voluntary monitor its gas emissions, doing so cost money. You need to demand it and make it a law to properly see what is really going on.
So what can we do about the harm these CAFO’s are doing, when it comes to the government who is really on our side? “The Environmental Protection Agency is obliged under the Clean Water Act to monitor America’s waterways and shield them from the toxic runoff from factory farms. But the growth of that industry, and its courtroom tenacity, has far outstripped the E.P.A.’s efforts to restrict runoff from manure lagoons and feedlots.” (nytimes) It seems to me that past administrations have taken the wind out of the EPA’s sails. They have had significant cutbacks in their work force and funding and unfortunately continue to experience them thanks to republicans which now control the majority. In 2012 two proposed rules that the E.P.A. had proposed were withdrawn. The first rule would gather basic information from all factory farms and the other would have expanded the amount of farms that are required to have a national pollution discharge permit which enables them to dump waste into the water at certain times. In 2013 fewer than 60% did. (NY times) With all those negative things happening in 2013 I believe one positive has come one has happened. Gina McCarthy was made the EPA administrator after a long delay by republicans, seeing how bad they didn’t want her to be in charge is a good sign that President Obama picked the right person for the job. This is a good start, the problem is getting enough of the public informed and motived by the information they see to elect someone that is going to do something about it. I fell that’s the only way things will change, boycotting McDonald’s, altering you’re eating habits, and only buying from sustainable farms is not going to have an significant impact on CAFO’s.
Unfortunately it seems that factory farms will always be a somewhat of a necessity. Even if informed not everyone can afford to make the right choice of buying organic free range produce and raising animals the “right way” takes longer and occupies more space, if all the factory farms were free range there wouldn’t be enough space to house the amount of animals that CAFO’s do. The sad truth is our society consumes entirely too much meat, it’s always been our first choice ever since the beginning of time and it will always be that way until there is no choice given. If we have gotten to the point where we can’t live without CAFO’s then the next step needs to be informing the public to the damage they are doing so that they can elect officials that will actually work on a solution and enforce it. The problem is CAFO’s are extremely good at keeping the public uneducated and they go through great lengths and massive amounts of money to keep it that way. They have been sculpting the EPA for years to make sure things go their way and that has helped keep the public uninformed and ignorant, their favorite type.







Work Cited

Bunton, Bryan, et al. "Monitoring And Modeling Of Emissions From Concentrated Animal Feeding Operations: Overview Of Methods." Environmental Health Perspectives 115.2 (2007): 303-307. Academic Search Complete. Web. 22 May 2014.

“Consumer Factsheet on: NITRATES/NITRITES” Epa.gov. 20 May. 2014

“How Factory Farms Impact You” factoryfarmmap.org. Food & Water Watch. Web. 21 May 2014.

Hribar, Carrie, MA. “Understanding Concentrated Animal Feeding Operations and Their Impact on Communities” National Association of Local Boards of Health. (2010). Web. 21 May 2014.

“Hydrogen Sulfide” osha.gov. Safety and health hazards. Web. 22 May. 2014

Kaplan, Ariel R. "Cafos: Five Essential Tools For Local Regulation." State & Local Law News 35.4 (2012): 10-11. Academic Search Complete. Web. 21 May 2014.

Lavin, Chad. "Factory Farms In A Consumer Society." American Studies (00263079) 50.1/2 (2009): 71-92. Academic Search Complete. Web. 21 May 2014.

Pew Commission on Industrial Farm Animal Production. “Putting meat on the table: industrial farm animal production in America.” April 2008 at 23 Web. 21 May 2014.

Pluhar, Evelyn. "Meat And Morality: Alternatives To Factory Farming." Journal Of Agricultural & Environmental Ethics 23.5 (2010): 455-468. Business Source Complete. Web. 21 May 2014.

“Public Health” Sustainabletable.org. Food Program. Web. 20 May. 2014

“The E.P.A. Backs Off on Factory Farms” Nytimes.com. Web. 14 June. 2013

Weeks, Jennifer. "Factory Farms: The Issues." CQ Researcher 17.2 (2007): 27. MasterFILE Premier. Web. 21 May 2014







Thursday, May 15, 2014

Blog Entry Number 10

Dr. Smith ENG 101: Blog Entry 10
Topic Sentence Outline

Title:  The Effects CAFO's have on the environment and public well being

Introduction
  1. Possible "Hook" to get the reader interested?
  2. Definition of Issue or Problem:
  3. Claim or Call to Action:

1. Factory farming also known as CAFO's (central organized feeding operations) effect certain people's health and everyone's living environment whether you realize it or not.
2. CAFO's are farms containing thousands or even millions of animals in an extremely cramped area. This leads to the releasing of extreme amounts of harmful gases from animal waste into the environment daily at levels that are extremely unsafe and unmanageable for the environment.
3. The EPA needs to tighten regulations and strictly enforce them to get levels of harmful gases entering the environment to a minimum.   

Body Paragraph
  1. Main Point, Idea, or Issue:
  2. Supporting Information:
  3. Supporting Details or Data:




1.Everyday factory farms emit pollution from animal waste that is harmful to the communities that surround them.
2.This pollution causes health problems for anyone that lives in the area the pollution reaches.
3. It can be either in the form of air or water pollution.

Body Paragraph
  1. Main Point, Idea, or Issue:
  2. Supporting Information:
  3. Supporting Details or Data:

1. Not only do CAFO's harm people directly they also harm people indirectly by causing harm to the environment.
2. Most of gases emitted from factory farms are one of the leading causes of Global Warming.
3. Global warming effects are becoming more and more apparent daily as glaciers are shrinking in size because of rising temperatures the sea levels continue to rise at an alarming rate. CAFOs contribute directly to global warming by releasing vast amounts of greenhouse gases into the atmosphere—more than the entire global transportation industry

Body Paragraph
  1. Main Point, Idea, or Issue:
  2. Supporting Information:
  3. Supporting Details or Data:


Body Paragraph
  1. Main Point, Idea, or Issue:
  2. Supporting Information:
  3. Supporting Details or Data:
    Still working......

Thursday, May 1, 2014

Fast Food Nation Research Report Entry 9



The General subject that my research project is going to be focused on is factory farming also known Concentrated Animal Feeding Operations or CAFOs.   The main focus of the project is going to be the effects the pollution from factory farming has on the environment (air, water, soil) including global warming, the health effects it has on workers at these farms, and the people in the surrounding communities around them.   I plan to argue for the need of these factory farms to find better ways to control all the pollutants they are emitting into the environment from animal waste and the chemicals they use.  For the government to tighten regulations on these CAFOs and enforce them rigorously as global warming is a problem that is only getting worst as time goes on.

So far I have turned to Google as my main source of information.  A lot of the websites end in .org and seem to be credible sources.  They are sharing information trying to keep people informed rather than making up their own bias views. 


Has a large amount of information on it covering all the aspects of food.  It provides information that the consumer would never get if they didn’t look for it.


A few quick facts that could possibly be turned into topics for different paragraphs for the research paper.


Real world occurrences


More helpful information and ways you can help.
http://www.unmc.edu/rural/documents/cafo-report.pdf
http://www.environmentalintegrity.org/pdf/publications/EPA_State_Failures_Regulate_CAFO.pdf
http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2367646/
http://www.environmentalintegrity.org/


          If my topic is approved I will start planning out how I will structure my paper and also make a time line and start getting stuff down on paper to make sure I ‘am not waiting until the night before to write this.  So far I haven’t come across any difficulties with the research process one of the reasons I choose this topic.  The other reason is that I feel strongly about helping keep the environment stay clean.

Thursday, April 24, 2014

Fast Food Nation Entry 8


The mistreatment of workers happens all too often in fast food chains, therefore they should form unions. Unions are necessary to make sure workers are being treated fairly and also to ensure that their pay stays current with the economy. Unions may not benefit the employer but it will most certainly make for a better working environment for the employee and possibly transcend into a more positive experience for the customers. In the book Fast Food Nation Eric Schlosser helps expose the horrors of being part of the working poor to the public.
            I used to work a job that I considered to be a dead end job, raises were almost impossible to get and the pay was not great to begin with. This effected my mindset greatly, I tended not to give my full effort and just did bare minimum to avoid being fired. When it comes to fast food chains this lack of motivation is going to reflect directly on the product that is being served. If a union were to be implemented it would allow for raises to be given out along with benefits. A worker that sees more money in their future may come to work with a different attitude, I know I would have. I feel this will translate to an enhanced customer experience with more helpful workers that produce a better product. 
Employees go to work sick all the time because they do not have sick days and can’t afford to call out. Sick workers lead to the contamination of food and can lead to other employees getting sick. If employees are getting benefits and sick days, the burden of expensive medical bills will be taken away along with possible contamination that could happen with a sick employee being present.
            In today’s economy unions are necessary because our country is currently in a recession. When these fast food industries first started most of the employees were teenagers who didn’t rely on wages to get by. At the end of their shift most likely workers were going home to their parents’ house where they lived rent free and using the money that they earned to buy things that weren’t necessities. Now with jobs becoming harder to find, some employees rely on their recently raised minimum wage of eight dollars an hour(current minimum in New York) to pay their bills and support a family. That is clearly not enough to support a family. If the fast food workers cannot do so who will help? The government now has to step in and provide assistance. So now we the tax payers are spending our money because unions are not there to regulate a fair wage. The general public pays once again for fast food company’s obsession with getting the most profit out of every dollar.
            Current working conditions are unfair; most of the teenagers that work in these establishments are untrained. “Every year, about 200,000 are injured on the job.” (P.99) Another big issue is that fast food establishments are a target for robberies. Making them in convenient locations makes for an easy get away. The worst part is that most of these robberies are committed by current and former employees. If workers were making a decent amount of money they may not resort to violent crimes that hurt their own demographic which is described as “the young and the poor.” (P.99)
                In conclusion Unions would benefit not only the workers inside but the people who go to these fast food chains. Pay rates would be increased, benefits would be provided and that would trickle down to a better consumer product served by someone who is smiling because they are happy to work there not because they are told they have to by the employer.