Blog Entry Number 10

Dr. Smith ENG 101: Blog Entry 10

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Title:  The Effects CAFO's have on the environment and public well being

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1. Factory farming also known as CAFO's (central organized feeding operations) effect certain people's health and everyone's living environment whether you realize it or not.
2. CAFO's are farms containing thousands or even millions of animals in an extremely cramped area. This leads to the releasing of extreme amounts of harmful gases from animal waste into the environment daily at levels that are extremely unsafe and unmanageable for the environment.
3. The EPA needs to tighten regulations and strictly enforce them to get levels of harmful gases entering the environment to a minimum.   

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1.Everyday factory farms emit pollution from animal waste that is harmful to the communities that surround them.
2.This pollution causes health problems for anyone that lives in the area the pollution reaches.
3. It can be either in the form of air or water pollution.

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1. Not only do CAFO's harm people directly they also harm people indirectly by causing harm to the environment.
2. Most of gases emitted from factory farms are one of the leading causes of Global Warming.
3. Global warming effects are becoming more and more apparent daily as glaciers are shrinking in size because of rising temperatures the sea levels continue to rise at an alarming rate. CAFOs contribute directly to global warming by releasing vast amounts of greenhouse gases into the atmosphere—more than the entire global transportation industry

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